# The Economist Submission Strategy Guide ## Amoral Intelligence Article - Complete Submission Package **Prepared:** 2025-10-20 **Project:** Agentic Governance Research Initiative **Target Publication:** The Economist --- ## EXECUTIVE SUMMARY This document outlines the complete strategy for submitting the "Amoral Intelligence" article to The Economist, including: - Primary and alternative submission paths - Key contacts with email addresses - Rules of engagement and editorial expectations - Timeline and follow-up protocol - Backup strategies if declined **Key Strategic Shift:** Moving from NYT (general public, emotional appeal) to The Economist (decision makers, analytical evidence) based on: 1. Target audience: Business leaders, policymakers, executives who make AI deployment decisions 2. Tone: Evidence-based, analytical, slightly contrarian (not activist or emotional) 3. Angle: Governance improves performance (counterintuitive finding for business readers) 4. Length: 920 words (Economist optimal range vs NYT 900 words) --- ## SUBMISSION OPTIONS ### OPTION 1: Direct Pitch to Technology Editor (PRIMARY STRATEGY) **Contact:** Henry Tricks, US Technology Editor **Email:** henry.tricks@economist.com **Phone:** The Economist main office: +44 207 830 7000 **LinkedIn:** linkedin.com/in/henry-tricks-5b045b48/ **Why This Approach:** - Most direct path for feature article placement - Technology editor has authority to commission pieces - Can request "By Invitation" if pitch strong enough - The Economist prefers section-specific pitches over general submissions **What to Send:** 1. Pitch letter (included in main document) 2. Full article in email body (920 words) 3. Link to supporting documentation: https://agenticgovernance.digital/docs.html 4. Offer availability for fact-checking and editorial discussion **Email Subject Line:** "Article Proposal: The NEW A.I. - Amoral Intelligence" **Expected Response Time:** - 2-4 weeks if interested - No response typically means declined (per Economist practice) - May send to fact-checkers or article authors for technical verification --- ### OPTION 2: Letter to the Editor (BACKUP STRATEGY) **Contact:** Letters Editor **Email:** letters@economist.com **Phone:** Same as main office **Why This Approach:** - Open submission (no pitch required) - Published regularly (every issue has letters section) - All letters begin with "SIR" (traditional British convention) - Maximum length: 250 words (typically 100-150 words published) **What to Send:** - 247-word letter (separate file created: Economist-Letter-Amoral-Intelligence.md) - Plain text in email body (no attachments) - Include full name and contact details **Email Subject Line:** "Letter to Editor: Amoral Intelligence and AI Governance" **Expected Response Time:** - 1-2 weeks if accepted - No response if declined - May edit for length or clarity without notifying author **Strategy:** Use this if: - Full article pitch declined or no response after 4 weeks - Want to respond to future Economist AI coverage - Seeking to establish credibility before re-pitching full piece --- ### OPTION 3: "By Invitation" (ASPIRATION PATH) **Contact:** Editorial team (invitation-only section) **Email:** Pitch through henry.tricks@economist.com or main editorial **Why This Approach:** - Prestigious guest essay section - Higher profile than regular articles - Personally invited by editors (not open submission) **What to Send:** - Same pitch as Option 1, noting interest in "By Invitation" if appropriate - Strong pitch may prompt invitation even if not initially solicited **Expected Response:** - Invitation typically comes from editors proactively - Strong article pitch may lead to invitation - If invited, editors provide specific guidelines and deadlines **Strategy:** Mention in pitch to Henry Tricks that material would suit "By Invitation" format, but don't insist on it. --- ## KEY EDITORIAL CONTACTS ### Primary Contacts **Henry Tricks** - US Technology Editor - Email: henry.tricks@economist.com - Role: Oversees technology coverage in US - Based in: United States (The Economist has global correspondents) **Letters Editor** - Email: letters@economist.com - Publishes 3-6 letters per issue - Typical length published: 100-250 words ### Structural Contacts **Main Editorial Office:** The Economist Newspaper Ltd 25 St. James's Street London SW1A 1HG United Kingdom Phone: +44 207 830 7000 **Email Format:** The Economist uses: first.last@economist.com (82.7% of work emails follow this pattern) ### Other Relevant Editors (If Technology Redirects) **Science & Technology Section:** - Check media directory at economist.com for current editor - London-based section editors handle most commissioning **Business Section:** - If framed more as enterprise/business strategy - May be interested in governance ROI angle --- ## THE ECONOMIST: STYLE & EDITORIAL GUIDELINES ### Writing Style (from The Economist Style Guide) **Required:** - Essay structure: beginning, middle, end (coherent whole) - Each paragraph follows logically; article suffers if sentence removed - Clarity above all: "plain, straightforward words" - Readily understandable to intelligent non-expert readers - Facts presented as story, not just information stitched together **Prohibited:** - Hectoring or arrogant tone ("those who disagree are not stupid") - Self-congratulation ("we correctly predicted") - Too chatty ("surprise, surprise") - Academic jargon or empty buzzwords - Long words disguising absence of thought - Stale metaphors **Tone Characteristics:** - Confident but not boastful - Analytical, not emotional - Evidence-based conclusions - Slightly contrarian or counterintuitive findings welcome - International perspective (not US-centric) ### Structural Preferences **Length:** - Feature articles: 600-1200 words (sweet spot ~800-950) - Letters: 100-250 words maximum - "By Invitation": typically 800-1000 words **Anonymous Byline:** - The Economist does NOT use bylines on regular articles - Publication speaks with "one collective voice" - Author credits only in "By Invitation" or special features - This means: don't expect prominent author attribution **Evidence Standards:** - Claims must be fact-checkable - May send article to technical experts for verification - May send to authors of cited work for validation - Provide supporting documentation proactively --- ## RULES OF ENGAGEMENT ### DO: 1. **Pitch to specific section editor** (not general submissions) - Identify relevant section (Technology, Science, Business) - Find section editor via media directory - Tailor pitch to section's typical coverage 2. **Provide supporting evidence** - Link to technical documentation - Offer fact-checking contacts - Make data/metrics available for verification 3. **Follow up professionally** - Wait 3 weeks before first follow-up - Send brief reminder email (3-4 sentences) - Accept no response as decline after 4 weeks 4. **Accept editorial control** - The Economist will edit for style, length, clarity - May not notify author of edits - Publication owns final version 5. **Time pitches strategically** - Relate to recent cover stories when possible - Connect to current news cycles - Offer timely perspective on developing stories ### DON'T: 1. **Don't submit simultaneously to multiple Economist sections** - Choose one section editor for initial pitch - If redirected, follow that direction 2. **Don't expect rapid response** - 2-4 weeks normal for consideration - No response typically means declined - Editors receive hundreds of pitches 3. **Don't demand byline or attribution** - Regular articles are anonymous - "By Invitation" does include attribution - This is fundamental Economist policy 4. **Don't be overly promotional** - Avoid "visit our website" in article body - Supporting materials fine in pitch/submission - Focus on analysis, not advertising framework 5. **Don't argue if declined** - Accept decision gracefully - May pitch different angle later - Maintain professional relationship for future --- ## TIMELINE & FOLLOW-UP PROTOCOL ### Week 1: Initial Submission - **Day 1:** Send pitch + article to henry.tricks@economist.com - **Day 1:** Set calendar reminder for 3-week follow-up - **Day 2-7:** Check for automated receipt or initial response ### Week 2-3: Waiting Period - No action required - Editors review, may fact-check, may discuss internally - May not acknowledge receipt (standard practice) ### Week 3: First Follow-Up (if no response) **Send brief email:** ``` Subject: Following up: Amoral Intelligence article pitch Mr. Tricks, Following up on my October 20th pitch regarding AI governance and performance (article: "The NEW A.I.: Amoral Intelligence"). Happy to discuss if timing/angle adjustments would strengthen relevance for Economist readers. Best regards, John Stroh research@agenticgovernance.digital ``` ### Week 4: Decision Point - If no response by end of week 4, consider declined - Move to backup strategy (letter to editor OR alternative publication) - Don't send additional follow-ups ### Alternative Timeline: If Accepted - Expect editorial queries and fact-checking requests - Turnaround typically 1-2 weeks for revisions - Publication may be weeks or months after acceptance - No guarantee of publication even if accepted (news cycle dependent) --- ## BACKUP STRATEGIES ### If Full Article Declined: **OPTION A: Submit Letter to Editor** - Use 247-word version (already prepared) - Send to letters@economist.com - Establishes presence in publication - May prompt future interest in full piece **OPTION B: Alternative Publications** 1. **Financial Times** (similar audience, business focus) - Contact: ft.com/contact - Style: Similar to Economist, slightly more business-focused 2. **Wall Street Journal** (US business leaders) - OpEd page: wsj.com/news/opinion - Conservative-leaning but respects rigorous analysis 3. **MIT Technology Review** (technical decision makers) - More technical depth acceptable - Contact: editors@technologyreview.com 4. **Harvard Business Review** (enterprise strategy focus) - Governance ROI angle strong fit - Contact: hbr.org/guidelines-for-authors 5. **Wired** (broader tech audience) - More narrative style acceptable - Contact: wired.com/about/contact **OPTION C: Revision & Resubmission** - Wait 6 months - Revise based on new developments - Re-pitch with updated evidence/events - Different angle or section ### If Letter Published: **Leverage for full article:** - Wait 2-3 months - Reference published letter in new pitch - Propose expanded treatment: "My recent letter on AI governance (published [date]) prompted questions about implementation..." - Demonstrates Economist has already validated core argument --- ## SUBMISSION CHECKLIST ### Pre-Submission: - [ ] Review article for Economist style compliance - [ ] Ensure supporting documentation accessible (https://agenticgovernance.digital/docs.html) - [ ] Prepare fact-checking contacts if requested - [ ] Confirm all empirical claims are defensible - [ ] Check article doesn't sound AI-written (human editorial review) ### Primary Submission (Technology Editor): - [ ] Send pitch letter to henry.tricks@economist.com - [ ] Include full article in email body - [ ] Attach .docx version as backup - [ ] Subject: "Article Proposal: The NEW A.I. - Amoral Intelligence" - [ ] Include supporting links in pitch - [ ] Set 3-week follow-up reminder ### Backup Submission (Letter to Editor): - [ ] Prepare 247-word letter version (completed) - [ ] Hold for 4 weeks after full article pitch - [ ] If no response, send to letters@economist.com - [ ] Plain text in email body (no attachment) - [ ] Subject: "Letter to Editor: Amoral Intelligence and AI Governance" --- ## KEY SUCCESS FACTORS ### What Makes This Pitch Strong: 1. **Counterintuitive Finding:** Governance improves performance (challenges business assumption) 2. **Evidence-Based:** Production metrics, ROI calculations, incident analysis 3. **Decision-Maker Relevant:** Addresses liability, compliance, competitive advantage 4. **Timely:** Enterprise AI deployments accelerating; regulatory frameworks forming 5. **Economist-Appropriate Tone:** Analytical, confident, slightly contrarian 6. **Clear Implications:** Business strategy + policy implications outlined ### Potential Weaknesses to Address: 1. **Limited Track Record:** Authors not widely known (counter with: data speaks for itself) 2. **Narrow Deployment:** Production evidence from limited deployments (counter with: preliminary but rigorous) 3. **Technical Complexity:** May seem too technical (counter with: executive summary focus) ### How Pitch Mitigates Concerns: - Opens with surprising finding (hooks business readers) - Uses plain language, not academic jargon - Provides concrete examples (medical AI, hiring AI) - Quantifies ROI (4,500,000% return speaks to business audience) - Offers clear policy implications (not just theoretical) --- ## POST-SUBMISSION EXPECTATIONS ### If Accepted: **Expect:** - Editorial queries about technical claims - Fact-checking verification requests - Potential length cuts (may reduce to 800 words) - Style edits without consultation - Publication weeks/months after acceptance - No byline on regular article (anonymous Economist voice) - Possible "By Invitation" upgrade if pitch very strong **Be Prepared To:** - Respond to fact-checking within 24-48 hours - Provide technical expert contacts - Accept significant editing - Defend empirical claims with data - Wait patiently for publication timing ### If Declined: **Don't:** - Ask for explanation (usually not provided) - Argue about decision - Burn bridges with defensive responses **Do:** - Thank editor for consideration - Ask if different angle would be of interest - Move to backup publication strategy - Maintain professional relationship for future pitches **Consider:** - Was timing off? (resubmit in 6 months with updates) - Was angle wrong for Economist? (try business publication instead) - Was evidence insufficient? (strengthen with more deployment data) - Was tone wrong? (more analytical? less technical?) --- ## CONTACT SUMMARY **Primary Submission Path:** - **To:** henry.tricks@economist.com - **Subject:** Article Proposal: The NEW A.I. - Amoral Intelligence - **Format:** Pitch letter + full article in email + .docx attachment - **Follow-up:** 3 weeks if no response **Backup Submission Path:** - **To:** letters@economist.com - **Subject:** Letter to Editor: Amoral Intelligence and AI Governance - **Format:** 247-word letter, plain text in email body - **Timing:** 4 weeks after primary pitch if no response **General Inquiries:** - **Address:** 25 St. James's Street, London SW1A 1HG, UK - **Phone:** +44 207 830 7000 - **Website:** economist.com --- ## COMPARISON: ECONOMIST VS NYT APPROACH | Aspect | The Economist | The New York Times (previous) | |--------|---------------|-------------------------------| | **Audience** | Business leaders, policymakers, global decision makers | General educated public, US-focused | | **Tone** | Analytical, evidence-based, slightly contrarian | Emotional appeal, moral urgency | | **Length** | 920 words | 897 words | | **Opening** | Surprising finding (governance improves performance) | Provocative question (alignment to whose values?) | | **Evidence** | Production metrics, ROI calculations | Conceptual arguments, examples | | **Angle** | Business opportunity + risk management | Ethical imperative + social risk | | **Byline** | Anonymous (or "By Invitation" with attribution) | Authors credited | | **Key Message** | Don't trade safety for performance—get both | Stop trying to make AI moral, make it governable | | **Call to Action** | Adopt structural governance (business case) | Demand governance (ethical case) | **Why The Economist is Better Fit:** 1. Target decision makers who can actually implement/adopt framework 2. Business case (ROI, liability reduction) aligns with reader priorities 3. Evidence-based approach fits analytical readership 4. International reach beyond US market 5. Prestigious platform for establishing credibility with enterprise/policy audiences --- ## FILES CREATED **Primary Submission Package:** - `Economist-Article-Amoral-Intelligence.md` - Full article (920 words) + pitch letter + supporting materials - `Economist-Article-Amoral-Intelligence.docx` - Word format for submission **Backup Materials:** - `Economist-Letter-Amoral-Intelligence.md` - 247-word letter to editor version - `Economist-Submission-Strategy.md` - This document (strategy guide) **Supporting Documentation (already exists):** - ROI case study: https://agenticgovernance.digital/docs/research-governance-roi-case-study.pdf - Technical framework: https://agenticgovernance.digital/docs.html - Production evidence: incident reports and performance metrics --- ## FINAL RECOMMENDATIONS ### Immediate Action: 1. **Human review** of article for AI-writing tells (ensure it doesn't sound generated) 2. **Send primary pitch** to henry.tricks@economist.com this week 3. **Set calendar reminder** for 3-week follow-up 4. **Prepare fact-checking responses** (have metrics/data ready) ### Medium-term: 1. **If no response by week 4:** Send letter to editor version (letters@economist.com) 2. **Monitor Economist AI coverage:** May provide opportunity for responsive letter 3. **Prepare alternative publication pitches:** FT, WSJ, HBR, MIT Tech Review ### Long-term: 1. **Build evidence base:** More production deployments = stronger future pitches 2. **Publish research papers:** Academic credibility strengthens "By Invitation" prospects 3. **Engage with Economist writers:** Comment on AI articles, build relationships 4. **Track deployment metrics:** Quarterly updates strengthen resubmission case --- **Strategic Intent:** This is not just about getting one article published—it's about establishing the Agentic Governance framework as a credible solution in the minds of decision makers who can accelerate adoption. The Economist is the optimal platform for this positioning. **Success Metric:** Not just publication, but generating enterprise inquiries, policy discussions, and framework adoption by organizations that read The Economist and make AI governance decisions. --- **END OF STRATEGY GUIDE** **Contact for Questions:** John Stroh, research@agenticgovernance.digital