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From: TheFlow <theflow@sydigital.com>
Date: Thu, 9 Oct 2025 09:07:07 +1300
Subject: [PATCH] refine(landing): humble positioning and nuanced language
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**Core Insight Refinement:**
- Changed "The Core Insight" → "A Starting Point" (more humble)
- Changed "architectural guarantees" → "structural constraints"
- Changed "we implement" → "we propose" (more tentative)
- Added "can adapt to individual, organizational, and societal norms"
- Changed "scales safely" → "may scale more safely" (acknowledges uncertainty)

**Audience Navigation:**
- Removed "Choose Your Path" (condescending tone)
- Replaced with humble acknowledgment: "We recognize this is one small step in addressing AI safety challenges. Explore the framework through the lens that resonates with your work."
- Added top padding (pt-24) to ensure hover tooltips have space to display

**Language Philosophy:**
- Acknowledges this is one small step, not a complete solution
- Uses "propose" and "may" instead of definitive claims
- Emphasizes adaptability to norms vs. rigid guarantees
- Maintains technical accuracy while being appropriately humble

Tooltips already work on hover via `group-hover:opacity-100` CSS.
Leader card action button already present ("View Leadership Resources").

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Co-Authored-By: Claude <noreply@anthropic.com>
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diff --git a/public/index.html b/public/index.html
index d81329d2..c9e9a406 100644
--- a/public/index.html
+++ b/public/index.html
@@ -61,18 +61,21 @@
   <!-- Value Proposition -->
   <section class="max-w-7xl mx-auto px-4 sm:px-6 lg:px-8 py-16" aria-labelledby="core-insight">
     <div class="bg-amber-50 border-l-4 border-amber-500 p-6 rounded-r-lg">
-      <h2 id="core-insight" class="text-2xl font-bold text-amber-900 mb-3">The Core Insight</h2>
+      <h2 id="core-insight" class="text-2xl font-bold text-amber-900 mb-3">A Starting Point</h2>
       <p class="text-amber-800 text-lg">
-        Instead of hoping AI systems <em>"behave correctly,"</em> we implement <strong>architectural guarantees</strong>
-        that certain decision types <strong>structurally require human judgment</strong>. This creates bounded AI operation
-        that scales safely with capability growth.
+        Instead of hoping AI systems <em>"behave correctly,"</em> we propose <strong>structural constraints</strong>
+        where certain decision types <strong>require human judgment</strong>. These architectural boundaries can adapt to
+        individual, organizational, and societal norms—creating a foundation for bounded AI operation
+        that may scale more safely with capability growth.
       </p>
     </div>
   </section>
 
   <!-- Three Audience Paths -->
-  <section class="max-w-7xl mx-auto px-4 sm:px-6 lg:px-8 py-16">
-    <h2 class="text-3xl font-bold text-center text-gray-900 mb-12">Choose Your Path</h2>
+  <section class="max-w-7xl mx-auto px-4 sm:px-6 lg:px-8 py-16 pt-24">
+    <p class="text-center text-gray-600 mb-12 max-w-2xl mx-auto">
+      We recognize this is one small step in addressing AI safety challenges. Explore the framework through the lens that resonates with your work.
+    </p>
 
     <div class="grid grid-cols-1 md:grid-cols-3 gap-8">