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   <!-- Value Proposition -->
   <section class="max-w-7xl mx-auto px-4 sm:px-6 lg:px-8 py-16" aria-labelledby="core-insight">
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-      <h2 id="core-insight" class="text-2xl font-bold text-amber-900 mb-3">The Core Insight</h2>
+      <h2 id="core-insight" class="text-2xl font-bold text-amber-900 mb-3">A Starting Point</h2>
       <p class="text-amber-800 text-lg">
-        Instead of hoping AI systems <em>"behave correctly,"</em> we implement <strong>architectural guarantees</strong>
-        that certain decision types <strong>structurally require human judgment</strong>. This creates bounded AI operation
-        that scales safely with capability growth.
+        Instead of hoping AI systems <em>"behave correctly,"</em> we propose <strong>structural constraints</strong>
+        where certain decision types <strong>require human judgment</strong>. These architectural boundaries can adapt to
+        individual, organizational, and societal norms—creating a foundation for bounded AI operation
+        that may scale more safely with capability growth.
       </p>
     </div>
   </section>
 
   <!-- Three Audience Paths -->
-  <section class="max-w-7xl mx-auto px-4 sm:px-6 lg:px-8 py-16">
-    <h2 class="text-3xl font-bold text-center text-gray-900 mb-12">Choose Your Path</h2>
+  <section class="max-w-7xl mx-auto px-4 sm:px-6 lg:px-8 py-16 pt-24">
+    <p class="text-center text-gray-600 mb-12 max-w-2xl mx-auto">
+      We recognize this is one small step in addressing AI safety challenges. Explore the framework through the lens that resonates with your work.
+    </p>
 
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